Paragraph Linking

LI: to correct certain structure and language features in a recount.

LI: to evaluate writing samples using the PBS writing rubric.

LI: to correct certain structure and language features in a recount.

This week for Reading we were learning about 4 topics. Paragraph linking, Sentence structure, paragraph structure and organising ideas. Our group was doing Paragraph linking. Paragraph linking is when you join one paragraph with another paragraph that dosn't have that much ideas.

I linked the paragraph that they got tired with the next paragraph leading to Mount Fuji. I joined those two paragraphs together bewcause of the little ideas the second paragraph had. then I just cut off a little word off and added one word and inked the paragraphs together to make one paragraph that still makes sense.