Sky Tower Test

L.I is to write a 40 minute recount about our sky tower trip
This week for our writing must do we had to write a 40 minute recount about the sky tower trip in test conditions. I wrote my story in 5 paragraphs. Then when we were done we had to look at our score for writing. My avarege score was T5. Next we scored other peoples ones and had to suggest mistakes in their writing then we had to go off and do it with our own work. I had 3 suggestions. 2 capital letters and an and in my work.

Recount: Zombies

L.I is to make a recount about going outside
On monday we went outside to play a game of Zombies. It was MR wrongs writing groups.
We had a lot of fun and this is a good way to write a recount thinking about the resources like: TREE, and more.