I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teacher is Mrs Anderson.
Thursday, 8 December 2016
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Tuesday, 8 November 2016
Mythical narritave
Once upon a time a friendly Giant and an evil Dragon lived in a deep cave.They were always sad because they had no one to play with.Dragon said to Giant,” Let’s make some friends.”
Dragon and Giant went to the village down below to make some friends. Everyone yelled DRAGON! DRAGON! DRAGON! and hid behind the windows.
”Don’t worry,” Dragon whispered. “Giant, we will find some friends soon.”
They went to the shops but no one was there.Then they heard screaming so Giant went to see where it was coming from.
“Why are you crying?” Giant whispered.
“An evil dragon is here.”
“He is not evil. He just wants to make friends, that's all.
“My baby thanks you for finding her”
“You’re welcome.”
“Let’s be friends,” said the kids mother.
The villagers cheered and said, “Heros.”
Dragon and Giant were happy to have friends.
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Thursday, 1 September 2016
Planet Krypton
“Oh no,” shouts Commander Robot.
“A meteor shower is coming towards us,” says Alien.
A big bolder bangs into their spaceship. BANG!!
Their spaceship breaks down.
“Don't worry whispers Alien. There is a planet called Krypton near by.”
“Krypton looks so creepy because it is hot it has no gravity and has big bursting geysers,” says Robot.
The two friends quickly fix their broken spaceship and fly out to Krypton.
When they get to Krypton Alien says,
“ I am so hot.”
“Don’t worry. We will get home soon,” says Robot.
“I hope so,” says Alien in a crying voice.
Suddenly Robot hears a sound from the distance. It was Alien’s family.
Mum,Dad you found me. Our spaceship broke down.”
“We will give you a ride,”
“Thanks said Robot,” with excitement.
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Tamaki River
Karlos and I stood at the peaceful Tamaki River.The seagulls were flying above us and expensive yachts were bobbing up and down on the calm water.We smelt rotting shellfish and it made our stomach turn.
Suddenly Karlos went to close to the jetty and SPLASH! He was waving his arms and calling for help. His eyes were as huge as flying saucers.My friend was in huge trouble because he was not a confident swimmer.
I went looking for help when I saw an old rope under some wood.I threw it to Karlos.I said,”Grab on to that old raft and hold the rope.” Karlos floated down to the shore and landed safely.
As we were walking home I told Karlos how scared I had felt while he was in the water.
“Next time you shouldn’t walk too close to the edge of the jetty.”
“ You do not need to remind me of that because I have learnt my lesson.” he replied in an embarrassed voice.
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