Thursday, 8 December 2016
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Tuesday, 8 November 2016
Mythical narritave
Once upon a time a friendly Giant and an evil Dragon lived in a deep cave.They were always sad because they had no one to play with.Dragon said to Giant,” Let’s make some friends.”
Dragon and Giant went to the village down below to make some friends. Everyone yelled DRAGON! DRAGON! DRAGON! and hid behind the windows.
”Don’t worry,” Dragon whispered. “Giant, we will find some friends soon.”
They went to the shops but no one was there.Then they heard screaming so Giant went to see where it was coming from.
“Why are you crying?” Giant whispered.
“An evil dragon is here.”
“He is not evil. He just wants to make friends, that's all.
“My baby thanks you for finding her”
“You’re welcome.”
“Let’s be friends,” said the kids mother.
The villagers cheered and said, “Heros.”
Dragon and Giant were happy to have friends.
Thursday, 1 September 2016
Planet Krypton
“Oh no,” shouts Commander Robot.
“A meteor shower is coming towards us,” says Alien.
A big bolder bangs into their spaceship. BANG!!
Their spaceship breaks down.
“Don't worry whispers Alien. There is a planet called Krypton near by.”
“Krypton looks so creepy because it is hot it has no gravity and has big bursting geysers,” says Robot.
The two friends quickly fix their broken spaceship and fly out to Krypton.
When they get to Krypton Alien says,
“ I am so hot.”
“Don’t worry. We will get home soon,” says Robot.
“I hope so,” says Alien in a crying voice.
Suddenly Robot hears a sound from the distance. It was Alien’s family.
Mum,Dad you found me. Our spaceship broke down.”
“We will give you a ride,”
“Thanks said Robot,” with excitement.
Tamaki River
Karlos and I stood at the peaceful Tamaki River.The seagulls were flying above us and expensive yachts were bobbing up and down on the calm water.We smelt rotting shellfish and it made our stomach turn.
Suddenly Karlos went to close to the jetty and SPLASH! He was waving his arms and calling for help. His eyes were as huge as flying saucers.My friend was in huge trouble because he was not a confident swimmer.
I went looking for help when I saw an old rope under some wood.I threw it to Karlos.I said,”Grab on to that old raft and hold the rope.” Karlos floated down to the shore and landed safely.
As we were walking home I told Karlos how scared I had felt while he was in the water.
“Next time you shouldn’t walk too close to the edge of the jetty.”
“ You do not need to remind me of that because I have learnt my lesson.” he replied in an embarrassed voice.
Sentences
- My baby brother can walk Either when he is small
- Children at my school are big.
- Sometimes I eat pies.
- I can run quickly.
- I will build a park at our school.
- Anyone can be my friend.
Using correct punctuation
“Here we are at last,”moaned Matthew.
it's a great place” said mum
“I hope It has wifi because I want to watch john cena”.
”you’ll be lucky.’’We will be busy doing lost of activities” mum said.”
“This is not my idea of a holiday,”Matthew moans.
Main ideas
a girl and her mother moved to new zealand from korea.
1.
they said look at all of this grass there is not that many grass in korea
2.
the girl and her mum wanted to have a race to the supermarket so she raced her mum.
3.
the girl saw the footpath had gone there was just grass.
4
the girl called for her mum and her mum said we can walk on the road but this car showed up the people in the car said do not walk on the road.
5
Number line
30+55=?
I started at 30 and went to 50 which I added 20 then I add the 30 to the 20 to make 50 and add 5 to get to 55.
My 5 Maori words
L.I:I am learning to draw a rhombus to put 5 maori words that I want to learn for maori language week.My 5 words are:
- Poaka/pig
- Takia/tiger
- Manu/bird
- Honu/turtle
- Kuri/dog
My little helpful earth worm story
One day I saw a worm and thought that I will not eat it because it is helpful.It can help the soil make plants grow.Then I had an idea. I could leave the worm in MY own garden so I could have all the veggies and fruit but I also wanted to take it to school.I dropped my worm in the water and it died then I felt sad.I buried it in the dirt and went inside and told my mum about the worm she said she was sad as well I will remember that worm.
WHY EARTH WORMS ARE IMPORTANT
How to be a good friend
How to be a good friend
Take them to the sick bay
Take them to the sick bay
Stand up for them
Help when they get stuck on there work
I was learning how to be a good friend
Wednesday, 31 August 2016
Planet Krypton
“Oh no,” shouts Commander Robot.
“A meteor shower is coming towards us,” say Alien.
A big bolder bangs into their spaceship. BANG!!
Their spaceship breaks down.
“Don't worry whispers Alien. There is a planet called Krypton near by.”
“Krypton looks so creepy because it is hot it has no gravity and has big bursting geysers,” says Robot.
The two friends quickly fix their broken spaceship and fly out to Krypton.
When they get to Krypton Alien says,
“ I am so hot.”
“Don’t worry. We will get home soon,” says Robot.
“I hope so,” says Alien in a crying voice.
Suddenly Robot hears a sound from the distance. It was Alien’s family.
Mum,Dad you found me. Our spaceship broke down.”
“We will give you a ride,”
“Thanks said Robot,” with excitement.
Today I was learning how to use speech marks in my story.
Monday, 15 August 2016
The Tamaki River
Karlos and I stood at the peaceful Tamaki River.The seagulls were flying above us and expensive yachts were bobbing up and down on the calm water.We smelt rotting shellfish and it made our stomach turn.
Suddenly Karlos went to close to the jetty and SPLASH! He was waving his arms and calling for help. His eyes were as huge as flying saucers.My friend was in huge trouble because he was not a confident swimmer.
I went looking for help when I saw an old rope under some wood.I threw it to Karlos.I said,”Grab on to that old raft and hold the rope.” Karlos floated down to the shore and landed safely.
As we were walking home I told Karlos how scared I had felt while he was in the water.
“Next time you shouldn’t walk too close to the edge of the jetty.”
“ You do not need to remind me of that because I have learnt my lesson.” he replied in an embarrassed voice.
Wednesday, 1 June 2016
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